This is one dead end iteration that comes to mind. It was a composition WAAAAAAAAY back to the dot book when I was trying to fit the word "passionate" into the book. It was my ineptitude with the abstract form that made me veto this composition AND the word. However, now that I look at it, I could rework this and make at least a passable iteration.
With this piece the main problem was that I kept inadvertently making forms that resembled literal things. This made a writing passion I wanted, but i kept seeing this little monster with hairy armpits dancing (lol). As much as I actually like that, it sure didn't help me. If I had kept the movement without the details or the touching of forms, it would be possible to keep the word.
(sigh)
I still like my hairy armpit monster
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